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Your Lack Of A Kindred Spirit A Poem
Your Lack Of A Kindred Spirit A Poem It is like you punched in the gut. It was not actual My mind made The leap to pain. Along with The accompanying wince. I tried hard Not to have tears Stream down my . I had to stop them Which I barely did. But I was all alone So I am not sure I truly had To make the effort. Or be so brave. I know my failings. I practically broadcast them Then you tell I should have saved my breath. I should not have such regrets. I should do what Makes happy Others' views of Be damned! I cannot do that. It is not how I am wired I am half a century And I have cared too much. For too long. Can I now change my tune? Change my song? You see from my initial reaction That I am so effing sensitive. It is not that I am self centered Well maybe I am. But it has not done much good In fact it is just the opposite. You wanted to be more Than what I am But not to judge But to have my dreams And goals meet Their targets If that were to make Me happy. So my reaction Was the thought that I could have my dreams Realized with someone's help Someone who cared enough To take a leap of faith That I am worth the price The change for both Of our benefit. Indeed such a thought Was almost painful In that it was something That was held in so long That I was all alone In my journey Without a kindred spirit Without a partnering soul. Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely |
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This poem was written in February of 2018. Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely
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nice poetry
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I only want. Inequities transcribed upon each molecule! Structure forth limbs; who's narcissistic movements belittle the past. Governing me towards greener pastures.
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nice poetry Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely
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I only want. Inequities transcribed upon each molecule! Structure forth limbs; who's narcissistic movements belittle the past. Governing me towards greener pastures. I only want. Inequities transcribed upon each molecule! Structure forth limbs; Whose narcissistic movements Belittle the past. Governing me towards Greener pastures. That makes it easier for me to grasp. I can understand the first two lines. That is beautiful. The next two thoughts of the structure forth limbs and narcissistic movements belittling the past...that is profound. But how does it govern you to greener pastures? Would it be better to use directing me towards greener pastures if you wish to continue with the phrase green pastures? Or you could just say directing me to a future I wish I could imagine. Just some thoughts. Tell me what you are thinking... Independently Romantic Sounds Better Than Lonely
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